Hihi! Once more, thank you for the update! <3
I only found a couple of typos this time.
- I have no idea if this is new or not, but when checking the "Darling You" interface, at the bottom where it says in which route you are in, sans isn't capitalized in the Sans route.
- "And in walks another skeleton.", third paragraph, should be tiles instead of tile.
Absolutely loved the food war with Sans and Papyrus + Gaster's appearance later on. As an older sibling and the oldest cousin, I can confirm that is how it feels. Keep up the good work! Remember to take breaks when you need them!