Sounds like Bas' and Frankie might be the best of friends by the end of this, lol. She's a woman after his own heart <3
And I didn't think anyone would actually notice the punk journal entry! It's cool seeing people touch on the small things I snuck in there <3 The great thing about defining each physical trait as a variable is that I can sprinkle in those immersive little references all throughout the story!
I love her quote, btw. Again, dumbass MCs are my absolute favorite <3