From a technical perspective, this is an achievement! The onscreen storybook is responsive and web-friendly, using actual selectable text. It looks great and is easy to navigate.
The music is whimsical and fun, and it's impressive that there are so many different pieces of music for different sections of the story.
I was pleasantly surprised that there were selectable dialogue options beginning in Chapter 2! My main critique is that I think there should be a small dialogue choice almost right away, to establish to players/readers that there is an interactive component to the story.
I don't play many visual novels, but I enjoyed the time I spent with this wonderful package!
Edit: I almost forgot the drawings! The sketches on each page add a lot of character to the story, and they were all impressive!