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This chapter did way too much jumping around, also you don't need to announce every single time you're changing perspectives. When you do that it kinda insults the readers reading comprehension, like unless you tell them they'll never figure out even though it's obvious. Finally this cliffhanger didn't fell earned and it played out really trollish because of the constant back and forth it felt like almost no progress was made story wise, even though it kinda did. I am looking forward to the next chapter and hoping it's better and really hopeful we get to know what the MC sacrificed. Also is it was even needed in the first place as it kinda seemed Draveyar's uncle released him himself and not the spell, finally will the MC turn into a werewolf since ya know he got bit and all or will that be addressed in the story? Cause I'm half expecting it with how we got asked what color werewolf would we be if we got turned and all