Hello !
I did both of your games ( "Make sure it's closed" didn't worked on me though, maybe the low poly PS style :o ), and overall I prefer this one, the old movie style, the tension slowly build by the text, and just the fact we can look back ( well I did not look back enough, that may explain why I had the bad ending there :p ) did the job ^^
Anyway, if you're doing more horror games, I'll gladly go through it, as it was a good short experience overall !
( Run to Nowhere start at 4:54, in case you want to skip ^^ )