Yay! I was so excited when I saw this had been updated :D oh it's getting so good! I'm dying to know who the renegade and shadow are to Rayco as they keep calling him pretender and also the renegade seems to think we look like someone from his past maybe? Its just so intriguing! I did find two errors at least I think they are since I'm with Rayco, here they are.
The demon is between you and the path to the door, Omar is not here to help you, and you can't fight comfortably in this room, much less if you have to hold the torch up to be able to see.
And here too
“Damn it! Omar-”
Oh back to Rayco, he really didn't want me touching his wounded wing :( I wanted to kiss it all better but he shot me down lol I did melt though when he protected me within them. Great chapter!