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You probably spent a lot of time making this. Damn, I wish I could have the time to learn and become as good as you. Not only the story, but also the level of programming really hit me hard. I have to login just to say this.

Just one problem. The game offer a lot of choices which I believe are not so matter. It would be better to have only around 10 or 12 choices in one chapter, I think

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I believe it is because too much text would appear at once. and It can also help with immersion on the first playthrough.