I think I kept walking off the screen in that red-monitor-scene for 5min straights, because the player wouldn't come back and I thought maybe that's the way to freedom ;-)
you created an intensely sad atmosphere with both the minimal visuals and also sound effects, the scenes are surprising and unpredictable, but also quite confusing. not knowing who does the talking at any given moment is confusing for example - if that is by choice because everything is happening inside the players head or sth. then I can respect that. but if things get overwhelmingly confusing I start to loose interest for the story, which is kind of a shame because tonally it is quite promising.
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Woah, thank you so much for the feedback, those are some things that i didn't noticed! Seems like i forgot about límits on that scene, but i was with SO little time haha (5 days, 2 hours a day), and yeah, i had to cut some scenes for the time límit, and didn't finish it at all.
And you're right! I need to fix the text and clarify who is talking, that is really a thing that i didn't see, so thank you again, i know what to focus more the next time!
This is my first jam, so i got a nice view on how to get better at it!