The whole story was so beautiful and the artworks was perfectly fitting for the music and everything. I absolutely loved it! Artwork beautifully portraited the 2 dimensions, which I loved, since it doesn't just have to be gameplay itself doing it.
I'm very angry at you though, how dare you end the story there... You better continue this one and tag me once it's done! Having a small daughter myself (bit over 1.5y old), this made me tear up. Everything just worked with this.
Only critique would be the start, why have the little girl walk all over there so slowly, when you could have just let the player do the walking and explore that way a bit more. Also I think what really would have made the game pop (obviously understand that time pressure making this much already must have been enormous), but some small interactions or even just SFX when you went to look at like the little bird on the log or something, which would have made exploring the area a bit more interesting as well :)