This game looks really nice, like visually and presentation-wise, this looks like a game you could buy on some game market. The text and effects in the dialogue is great, and the sound effects that follow are really nice. I'm really interested in seeing where this game goes.
Keep up the good work!
Oh, but also, make sure all the rooms work and that a certain individual who would want to break the game by going at things in the wrong order doesn't mess things up.