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I'm liking the idea of this so far, so definitely keep it up. Looks like the first chapter could go for a typo and grammar pass, though. Some of the sentences are a little awkwardly constructed.

Love Amok, hope he continues to be a major character in future chapters!

Hi Grakor, thanks for the comments, the source of the text was already changed in the Update a few days ago, and the translation will be more careful for the next chapters. And yes, Amok, it's almost one of the main characters. Thank you very much for playing the novel. Hugs