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I'm not a fan of having a bunch of stuff in the general interface so everything is pretty sorted so to speak. Although it would be simple (for example you can really easily see the current mood points of each girl), it would mean more stuff in the interface (inventory/favourite girl). I could look into adding something, yes, but it's not something I'm contemplating right now.

The dialogues aren't what they used to be (-50% text/dialogues on many occasions), so there's not so much "charm" anymore, much to my regret. People are too demanding when it comes to English because in Spanish (my native language) they want and have always wanted even more dialogue and all that "redundant" stuff as is quite usual. What you see is a story written by a Spaniard, translated by the same Spaniard, and revised by a native English speaker (and it does not have a deep revision, but a revision so that the dialogues are correctly understandable, do not have spelling mistakes, literal translations, etc.). Could be better, but also could be worse. This gives for a long and extended talk especially if I put on the table that I write thinking for a general public, not for people who have a high level of English, and as always, I like to extend things a bit even if it may sound redundant (like all this explanation). The improvement in narrative quality will come at a very slow pace and without a deadline as such but I have yet to discuss this with my proofreader because even if the narrative improves, I still want it to be understandable and easy to follow even if you have a fairly "average" level of English. If it were up to me, I would rewrite the whole story but it would no longer be so "LA" and it would be too "professional", and I don't like that idea. There are a lot of dialogues that can be improved as I do not have a native English level, that's obvious, but I also have to point out that if everything was less redundant/silly, the personality of many girls would not be the same and the gameplay of a quest would last 5min instead of 10. It is true that at the beginning for example, everything is more tiring with Maria but that is done on purpose because Maria also has a curve in the change of personality a little more complex than it seems. Anyway, as I always say, although I know my flaws in writing, it's not something that can be changed quickly, even if I always try my best.

This will come, or at least I'd like it to come, everything related to L'sA but in LA. Likewise, there will be LA 1.5 before LA 2, you have a little wink at the end of the second-anniversary game. I sounded passionate because I found that having someone like Lisapi as MC made everything very easy, the scenes came out by themselves, the ideas too, I didn't have to worry about if she sounded "SJW" or whatever... everything was simpler, and fun to work with. Unfortunately, people prefer the usual, and a purely lesbian story isn't that appealing. I'll see what I do in the future anyway (I don't like to talk about content that I'm not entirely sure how I'm going to implement).