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I am shocked that I am the first to comment. This was such an amazing game! The lore, the story and the way it progresses was really interesting. I wish this game was longer. There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but that's okay. The personality of the MC was very different from me. I didn't like that she was so untrusting of the person who had saved her and was keeping her alive. I thought she was a bit ungrateful. lol. I replayed it and got all of the endings. Ending 4 was my favourite of course! I'm a sucker for a good romance. The art was beautiful, Arodon was beautiful, his looks as well as personality. Such a good game. I wish it was longer! 

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Thank you for your kind words! I really appreciate that you took the time to comment. Thank you for your feedback, too! This game wasn't really proofread by anyone so thanks for telling me about the errors. This game was mostly written at night, so typos are to be expected. I'll make sure to fix them soon!

I absolutely understand why you think Vira is a bit ungrateful. In her defence, she's going through a lot with the accident and all that follows. But I'll keep that in mind for future games. 

Even if this story was relatively short, I hope you come back for my next story, set in the same universe but in a different season. I'll include some sweet, little anecdotes about Arodon and Vira in the upcoming season(s) and who knows, maybe I'll write a second part for these two someday. :)

You just made my day with your comment! <3

I can't wait to read your other stories! ^_^