A really nice game! I cannot understand why no have played it yet. Anyway, I liked the story and the simplicity of it: just going through a town on the way to a greater goal. I think that you did a great job at conveying what you wanted to according to the description! I really like that you write your actions. This makes the game feel very immersive. The help command really helped me know what I could do. I also love the landscape and town pictures. As for what can be improved, I would prefer a font that is easier to read. If I could click to make all text appear would be an appreciated feature.
I would also like to know the number of endings/choices that changes the story. I only found two. Overall, great game. Good job!
Also, I found a bug, the text is on the picture. (I cannot attach a screenshot for some reason)
Rating: 4/5