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What a fun entry. And we already KNOW it won't finish in 1800th place. I would even wager it'll make it to top ten. It's incredibly LONG for a game made in 14 days! And very fun! The idea with all the famous (if hardly recognisable - this letter change is quite something) writers is so well executed and just makes so much sense. Nice meta story about the gamejam!

I think it could have done with a second round of proofreading and it took me much more time than I like to admit to figure out how to go SOUTH but it plays really well. Some story progression doesn't feel "clean" and some puzzles need to be signposted better (especially why was I allowed to go east and west at a certain point but not north?) but other parts more than make up for it.

I also noticed some imbalance with the writing, sometimes there's not a lot of (different) dialogue with some NPCs then there's quite a bit of story dumping going on.

But I am sounding far too negative again, this was really enjoyable and deserves a top ten ranking!

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thanks :-) I'm really happy about your nice words - and for your feedback too. You're right - the south hotspot must be expanded (I made it too small - that I think it's fair if I change with an update, including a couple of minor bugs) and you're right too - some dialogues need to be added (at last I've duplicated some of them because I was too late), some others to be written in a better, more clear way - and I need more overall proofreading :-| Those things I hope to be able to do AFTER the jam period.

Thanks again :-)