Decent VN demo for this Jam.
I like the effort put into the portraits (and Kanako and Suwako's very aaaaa portraits too).
The writing's pretty good too, both the mystic-like intro, and the standard but lively dialog parts!
I think the end of this demo ends the game on a weak note though. No cliffhanger, no hint at what's Koishi or the rest are concretely going to do, no real end note.
In other words: The Moriya family just walks away, Koishi's intervention fails(?), and there's no real resolution (positive or negative) to this - which is why I feel it's a bit weak.
I understand there wasn't time for everything, but surely making this a chapter with its end would give it a nice aftertaste.