It was pure luck that led to me finding your work, but thank you for the time you’ve put in!
I’ll be honest, I’ve played neither (though own and have read both), but I don’t see a huge issue with the wording as it stands. Certainly any discrepancies can be easily smoothed out at the table. Starforged certainly seems to have taken the simplicity of Ironsworn and tuned it so that the moves are slightly more specific.
How much have you played with Division Sworn? Solo, guided..? What kinds of things have you got up to in-game? I’m super curious to know how it has worked for you, and whether you’ve introduced or converted any additional systems e.g. using Starforged’s ‘Command Vehicle’ as a framework for the Division’s base of operations etc?