This is so much different from all the others. It didn't use the assets given from Wagle BUT what the VN did was tell a story that got me to enjoy it.
The whole thing was FABOLOUS! From seeing how he passed to him showing his happiest moment and Memento just being a goofball, the VN deserved this win.
The others were ALL COPY & PASTE! But this...THIS WAS FAR FROM THAT! If it was that, why would I write this AMAZING #1 May Wolf Short Story a review? I even felt chills with one line that Memento said to Mori. SO RETABLE AND YET SCARY! Also Mori's attitude was like scared...calm...afraid to feeling at peace with his death.
Cetus I don't think you need to do ANYTHING to add to it. Just leave it be. it's a masterpiece on it's own short form.
Do I have any negatives?
I do not think I have anything bad to say about it. Perfect.