it took 2 hours to read through(i guess i read english 4 times slower, ha! a new discovery!) and i had a great experiance!
awwwwwww, what a nice story... so wonderful... thank you for making this!!!!! i fully recommend it!!
the emotion is natural and fluid. the facial expression is reflective. our cat and witch's personality is vivid and well-set...! they're all adorable...... and that thanks to you!
i kinda know the feeling so it gave me resonance... and flashbacks... i'm happy how you wrote them, resolve them, it's so cute and warm, it did bestowed me positive sentimentals.
their relationship is stuggled and complex as well, yet sooooo nice and cute... i love it and i'm looking forward to read next fanfic...! glad i had read the first part through haha, reavealed the little secret toffee held. not so glad that i didn't sitck on the long fan-novel... that how they become this, i'm always into that kind of things, maybe i will read them bit by bit afterward.
by the way i like how toffee's tail laid on butterscorch, it's very cute! and a weird little question that... what the icon is? a pumpkin and a hmmmmm...???????
anyhow, i love it, and wish to see more things you create! ganbatte kudasai!!!!!!!!!!!!