found this browsing itch.io, didn't know ur tumblr before reading. just wanted to say how cool and clever i found this. it's really interesting how you deliver the text and make the reader slow down and linger on words and variations of the words. (i think this type of click-adventure is the first i've seen in poems. were u inspired by similar stuff? bcz i'd love to see more shit like this) and the shape of the paragraphs, and the timing they're fed to us, revealing what's happening in present tense. and the white pixelated little visual aids were so lovely. like shadowy images. u made a beautiful interactive text story.
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i'm actually slowly working through more things in this vein of fiction! as far as inspirations and similar stories go, "cycles" by cecile richard has a similar vibe (mostly because i played it and went "HOW CAN I DO THIS?"). besides that, the style was mostly just a result of me having trouble with larger paragraphs in fiction because of dyslexia/various other processing disorders. also it's really fun to click through text and to see it change + i love word art so much
but seriously!! tysm for the kind words !!!