ur effort shows what u did on everything, from the story to the backgrounds even the sounds.
for me it easily ur vn made it to be the one of best vn out here, better even than RemembertheFlowers from many things, side to side with
Extracurricular Activities on things like the storyline, etc.
maybe I'm exaggerating, the reason is simple: u show the appropriate attitude and epic reaction of the MC for a story I'm thinking about all the time. (one of ADHD things I do all the time)
seeing any story have something similar to what I'm thinking about, makes my life more easier.