Alrighty! Ive played this for a good 10 hours and I thinks its time for a sandwich.
always start with the good first. I can tell how much work and effort was put into this project. The art style is pretty nice as well as te dialogue.
However... after a bit of time I felt like the story was feeling a bit stale. Yes, it's admirable how much time was put into this but there's not a lot, in my opinion, that keeps the story interesting.
and now for the last part of the sandwich..
Lore on different mythical and fictional races! Mostly spot on with this and really quite impressive. To me it seems you've done your research on them.
But all in all, the story starting to lack later on for a VN is a bit of a turn off for me, so I would rate this game so far at a 5 out of 10. The saving graces are that I can tell the effort that was put into this. Maybe after some polish for the story the rating would go up.