First, I have to say that this game was awesome. Exactly what I was looking for. I only wish it was longer. Really hope you continue with added chapters. However, I vehemently disagree with peoples desire for a linear approach. If I wanted that, I would just replay one of a thousand games that already did that. I felt like this approach gave a sense of reality. Coming to a central point only to get lost in a new maze felt more realistic than a "straight" path to an end. It gave a real feel to liminal spaces. Additionally, I feel like most of the "improvements" people are asking for are just their way of saying "make it easier so I can win". I loved the struggle of figuring it out for myself, and having to attempt some tasks a few times to get them just right to succeed. Also, liminal spaces are creepy enough in the imagination. Too much added creepy just becomes sappy. I think you're on the right path with what you have. Keep it up.