I've already made the corrections to the first segment and Eurbeatlover read it. I point out a few problems, all can be fixed with 2nd correction while introducing it into the game. Except one, which is cringe. He said the text is cringe. He also said that months ago when he read an early version of Harmful Heaven and he said it again now. I don't think I can do anything to make the text not cringe at this point, it will be for the next one to avoid making it cringe.
Also, I'm working extra hard to bring a surprise... It's not a big deal so I won't give too many details, but there's an interesting little thing coming.
I've created a mastodon account, I'll comment on things there from time to time. I have also been considering creating a Twitter account, but... The reason I haven't done that and instead got a mastodon is because I've only seen bad things about Twitter, but it's just that various creatives use it and are doing well, using it occasionally and in moderation. I don't know.Anyway, not so many problems at the moment. Work has been friendly, it's scaring me a little bit how things are going well actually.