Cool interpretation of the jam's theme! Didn't get it from the start, but made it to the good ending after 2 tries!
In my opinion, the player character moves too fast. Also, I'd ask myself a question: "Would my player relaunch the game if it closes by pressing the Quit button on the end screen?". Consider adding the Restart button to improve player retention :D
Also, you could make a WebGL build of your game: it's not complicated in your case, but definitely profitable!
Could you, please, play and rate my game too? Thank you in advance!