Never expected a free game to be so enticing and rich! Many things are done just right, especially in writing: the pacing, the amount teasing before finally providing the desired event, characters feel genuine and lovable... Helps to find yourself lost in a story which, unlike life, can often end in really desirable ways.
Another strong thing going for the game is humour and usage of memes. It's not overdone and spices things just right, often adding to the characters.
Maybe I'm so excited because it's my first VN of this sorts, so kinda losing nerd's virginity in a way lol. But still the game is quite good. The only thing that I'd find to be an improvement would be a more down-to-earth story to feel more realistic, a believable experience would make it feel more real. But the story provided fits the overall style well because you could feel the person behind the story doing his thing and in a way it's all harmonious.
Great game.