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Spoiler alert, this is an after story comment!

(A long text too)

That is to be expected from a comment section, but saying anyway w<)

I confess that for some chapters I wanted to strangle both main characters multiple times, in specific in the beginning of their relantionship; 

While thinking the moments they spent together were adorable I also kept wondering "When are they going to talk about their relationship?"

And then when the MC questioned if they were moving too quickly and Angel said he felt a sparkle I wanted to jump down at his throat.

I am not someone that believes in love at first sight. "Love at first sight" can be explained as in romantic attraction is something that can be triggered instantly much like sexual attraction or other reactions like fear and anger; but the attachment of love, only comes through work and a lot of time. 

The feeling that comes from infatuation on one hand feels amazing and on the other hand it's as fragile as a strand of hair.

But the thing is, that is something that can actually happen. As in... Two people that believe in it can meet each other, and if the "spark" happens, they can very well start a relationship in the first few days. (Getting Anna flashbacks from Frozen-..)

What I personally use to judge how good a visual novel is to me is based on its realism, on the underlying rules of the world of the visual novel.

By which I mean, I know that anthro animals don't exist in real life, but it is a rule in the world of this story, so having walking and talking animals is realistic in this context.

What I'm getting at is that, it's not as if they declared to be boyfriends after the first sex scene, they slowly began to act more like boyfriends, only later on calling each other by cute names and stuff like that..~

It does feel like how it would go like when these type of people meet.

So, despite my, um... Homicidal urges, I really liked reading the visual novel! 

Multiple times I laughed along out loud, I cried with the MC when he was telling Angel about what happened with his parents... And my god-

I think I had a romantic orgasm myself the second time they made love, it had no business being that good- o  o)

So, I'm looking forward to new updates!


A side note, I do wonder if the speed of their relationship will be addressed more or be left like that. I should say that since love at first sight is a shot in the dark, there are cases in which you end up with someone highly compatible that eventually turns into true love; the chances are very small, but it can happen.

So I wouldn't really be disappointed if it wasn't addressed anymore. On the other hand... I would love if they actually realized that it was risk they took, talk about it, leading to character development and then continue their relationship from then, stronger than before! 


But like I said, I don't really mind either way, I just want to keep on reading. w<)

Thank you!! w^)/

wow! Definitely one of the greatest and detailed reviews! πŸ₯° It's a treasure to find these kind of comments!βœ¨πŸ™Œ 

It's very fulfilling knowing this story can detonate all that feeling train! πŸ’–πŸ’–(And just you wait for what's coming nextπŸ˜‹)

Indeed, it's a very unusual love story process  I guess πŸ˜…

You bet there's more coming up! Next build will have high quality sprites! (Gonna make a post about soon)

Greetings from Mexico, and sowy if you find some very dumb grammar mistakes πŸ˜… Every build I find new ones to correct in the previous chapters. Still learning how to compose phrases and stuff πŸ˜…πŸ˜…

Wish you a horny day buddy! πŸ₯°πŸ”₯πŸ˜‹πŸ™Œ

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Thank you! I'm feeling excited already- wo)

Oo, greetings from Brazil! ^)/

Brazilian Portuguese is very similar to spanish, so everytime a character spoke in spanish I still understood like 95% of what they were saying; 

Funny how I had this exact thought around the third time:

"Americans are not going to understand a single word of what they're saying, are they? w<)"

If you did made any mistakes, then at least I didn't notice, so they probably weren't that serious! 

You too~! β€’w-)

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Hehe and even with that, Damian's Spanish is kind of a slangy spanish from northern Mexico, but anyway, all non-english dialogues are not supposed to be super important(?) πŸ˜… Like, it might also get understood just for the context 🀭 greetings from here to Brazil! I always feel like I understand a big part of portuguese too! (And would like to understand even more!πŸ₯°)