thanks for being receptive to feedback :D ultimately it's up to your discretion
I was worried that Raku would be too soft for the horror-romance enjoyers, so I'm glad that you liked him!
not at all! 100% it plays into thrilling development later on
I LOVED how you then withheld key information until the perfect point. absolute graceful restraint in that make-it-or-break-it reveal scene. <spoiler>if I were Nelli I wouldn't know what I'd let myself do too, not knowing intentions... "cut the cameras deadass" when yk what happened 🤐</spoiler>