The idea is good, indeed, but presentation and UX are bad.
- The lack of any sound and music make the experience much worse than it can be. (Said a guy whose first jam game without any sounds, lol)
- Highly recommend not to mix such different assets in terms of visuals. It makes the experience less consistent. Try to find assets which are as close to each other as possible to keep the visuals more consistent
- The important information is communicated to me through a chat window without any formatting and it's hard to understand what is going on. And less exciting.