The game is ok, one of the biggest problems is the size of the camera and the tracking. I couln't see the enemies when chasing the old man. Also the colliders could be slightly smaller, i got hit when i wasn't touching the enemies. Make sure when making a game that the player can see his sorroundings and that they don't hit enemies when not touching them, it's a good practise to make the enemies colliders slightly smaller than the enemy to prevent that.
Also, the progressive text effect is really good, but i would add some sound to it. I usually use structs with a string and an AudioClip variable to design the dialoges so that i can change the sound depending on the person talking.
I think you should keep learning and making games, with time you'll become much better and after a few years you'll realise how much progress you've made.
Game dev is an art that requires some talet. But talent is not innate, it is created with work and dedication, and anyone can have it if they are patient.
I wish you the best luck and i hope you enjoyed making the game and that you are proud of it, i'm sure the next one will be much better.
oh wait, that's what the other guy said... Well then it'll be WAY much better! ;)