Errors: When you meet the bully Linda she calls you "Dave" once and after that in Sarahs dialoge there is "Dave" mentioned again when she gasps and when she hugs the MC (I set a a name different than "Dave") in version 0.11.
Other than that, everything else was good, did not find grammar error, others called the MC by correct name.
Suggestion: maybie make a stage growth, like she grows a little, and a little more, then stops growing (from one spell, more little growth sprouts that achive the same final result).
Good game.