Hi Rob! I just wanted to share my thanks for developing such a great game. Visual Novels are way harder to develop than most people think, so I just wanted to let you know that your efforts have not gone unnoticed. Even though the game is unfinished there's a strong amount of polish and care present in the work!
In particular I enjoy how layered each character is. Most writers don't get beyond the initial baggage a character has. Each of the suitors on the Barakai is a highly-motivated individual who has been shaped by their experiences in the world around them. That seems obvious, yes, but it's actually a pain in the ass to flesh characters out that well in such a short amount of time, so kudos to you for doing so! You've made a Patron out of me :)
PS: Zed's route was my favorite so far. I'm a sucker for big protective guys I guess. Who know?