Wonderful! I found your game from you comic, and this is definitely one of the most well-polished games I've seen so far. The art looks great, the music sounds good, and the gameplay itself is engaging. The non-gameplay portions with the dialogue are also fantastic.
My critiques are pretty much all nitpicks, and could probably have been resolved had the time limit been longer than 48 hours.
It did feel like a lot of actions were missing audio feedback, but that's probably just because of the 48 hour time limit.
The length of the game is also a bit long for the amount of variety it has. This length would be fine if there was more variety in player abilities, enemies, etc., but as-is it kinda dragged on and should've been shortened to half or less as long.
But again, those are just nitpicks. You did excellent work!