When Computer told me not to look behind, i had to turn down the volume; it was starting to really creep me out…. That means it is very well done!
However, i am quite mad at Computer. First of all, cats are not evil. And second, after telling me how much he wants to be my friend, it starts chatting with that Mike fellow, completely ignoring me; that’s not what friends do…. 😉
I do have one small critique, however. One teeny tiny critique: in English there is no space before exclamation and question marks. That’s all.