This post intentionally split due to length limit (2/2). Here's the typos from the chapter 3 completion update.
EDIT: Fixed missing link.
Typos:
- C1, hub before Freezer: "If I'm correct, we going to need some protection from the cold.": we're
- C3, before Locker Room: "Show Cutsccene?"
- C3: same: "The major difference the hexagram's color.": difference is
- C3, same: "That's awefully conveniently.": awfully convenient
- C3, after Locker Room: "Please wait here while I call gather reinforcements."
- C3, same: Wrong portrait.
- C3, same: "so that Mei will make a Vermillion Bird Sandwhich!"
- C3, same (Bianca and Amara): "but at least I'm better than at them". (Wrapping, or missing name?)
- C3, same: "Even if we did, many sports require actual teams are": Maybe 'and' before 'are'?
- C3, DQC F1: "Play cut scene?": space.
- C3, same: "One of use will predict it's result": us, and no apostrophe in the possessive
- C3: same: "That seems awefully too random": awfully, and I think you only need 'awfully' or 'too'.
- C3, same: "Does any one": space (optional).
- C3, same: "should decided things"
- C3, same: "there's a single game in the West": I believe you mean 'similar'?
- C3, same: "people to win a round goes right while the rest goes left.": go (people is plural).
- C3, same: "until they are only three": there, though I think 'they' might not be that wrong
- C3, same: "Jupitarian": I don't know if this is wrong or not. The planet is spelled "Jupiter", but...
- C3, same: "Lunarabbitit attacks"
- (Well, that got very Touhou-y really fast. :P )
- C3, same: This line needs Shizuka's name in it since Amara was previously talking to Mei. Maybe instead of 'you', or maybe at the start or end.
- C3, same: "covete the mating rituals": covet
- C3, same: "I asume that is considered": assume
- (You know what? Amara has me convinced. I don't think her being from Jupiter is that strange in a setting like this.)
- C3, same: "At least she makes up her delusions with": makes up for
- (Wait, fingers? I thought Amara said... oh, right.)
- C3, same: "At least I'm not flirting with every girl she sees": I think, since this is a hypothetical, that should be 'I see'?
- C3, same: Can't tell if this is deliberate or you didn't finish typing. I think it needs a '-', '--', '...' or something?
- C3, same: "a lose like me": Line wraps, so the R is hidden. Or it's an actual typo.
- C3, same: "It sounds more enemies": sounds like
- "Hellbait: A succubus that petends".
- I see what you did there.
- C3, after the fight: "Play cut scene?": space
- C3, DQC F2: "Play Cutscene": No ?, capital C.
- C3, same: "intruders get pass us, her majesty will quite upset": past, will be
- C3, same: "Shizuke:"
- C3, after DQC F2: "Play cut scene?": space
- C3, same: "deal the big bad": deal with
- C3, same: "It's only bee one week": been
- Oh dear. I guess that should have been an obvious setup.
Unless it's her name, Impress should be Empress. I'm dumb. That's a pun. Unannounced, but a pun.- C3, after DQC F3: "Of all the teahcers who come to our rescue, it has to be": teachers, to, had?
- C3, same: "by Devil Queen's the horrid": 'by the Devil Queen's horrid'?
- C3, same: "I felt nothing pity": nothing but pity
- C3, same: "how reckless and stupid what you did?": did was
- C3, same: "what we should do these girls": do to
- C3, same: "If you excuse me": you'll
- C3, same: "Even we aren't trying to": even though (or when)
- C3, same: Some commas in the middle of those 0s might be helpful. Just, you know, to save me having to use my mouse to count them.
- C3, same: "Staring with next month's All Hollow's Evening": Starting. Also, I think the real life festival is "all hallow's eve", but you probably knew that.
- Bestiary:
- Pirat: "When none are found, it isn't unheard of them to": of for them?
- Pirat: Even apart from the 'aun' typo, this page is confusing me. They're a host of untold numbers (a massive army)? The phrasing is tripping me up.
- Pirat: "lead by a single powerful leader": led, not lead.
- Pirat: "canabalizes": It's spelled cannibalizes.
- Catfish: That's not a catfish.
- Catfish: The wording on the last page is a bit strange (especially the 'from').
- Hellhound: "Infernal Gaurdians"
- Hellhound: "Many a witch have been severely burned": This is actually a bit obscure, but I think 'many a witch' actually counts as singular, so 'have' should be 'has'. You can also have 'many witches have'.
- Hellhound: "Though not nearly as severe": severely?
- Hellhound: "but prefers raw meat": prefer
- Hellhound: "will not be raw the time": by the time
- Hellhound: "locations such tundras": such as
- Hellhound: "Anyone should simply undertake": This is entirely valid and correct, but "undertake lightly" might be better.
- Schoolghoul: "Dieng untimely and raised": Dying, and probably 'deaths' after 'untimely', which makes the sentence awkward... how about "Raised from the dead with dark magic after dying untimely deaths"? Does that still fit on the page?
- Schoolghoul: "And the body, becomes": their, and I don't think you need that comma.
- Schoolghoul: "their becomes": their body becomes
- Schoolghoul: "Why would a witch": 'why a witch would', maybe?
- Schoolghoul: "Any living creature that crosses it's path": Remove apostrophe
- Schoolghoul: "an inate hatred": innate
- Schoolghoul: "I would wander": wonder
- Running Dead: "enables them to tireless chase": tirelessly
- Running Dead: "had made the mistake to run from them": 'has made the mistake of running from them'?
- Running Dead: "To what reasoning": by?
- Running Dead: "creature such horrid beings": create
- Swimming Dead: No, I didn't miss this entry. It just doesn't have any typos that I can see.
- Jumping Dead: "necramancers seem hellbent of driven all to extinction.": necromancers, on, driving.
- Jumping Dead: "could out pace its prey": outpace can be one word
- Jumping Dead: "could adapt the terrain their advantage": to their
- Jumping Dead: "adapts to their terrain": It feels to me like that should be either 'her' or 'adapt'. but since the singular is 'jumping dead', the plural is 'jumping dead' and the collective is 'jumping dead', I'm a little uncertain.
- Dark Butler: Title page says Darl Butler.
- Dark Butler: "rarely high ranking demon society, making their subservant": in demon society, subservient
- Yuki Musume: "Itt's currently unknown"
- Yuki Musume: "more mischeavious and than malicious": mischievous, and you missed a word after 'and' (or you can just remove 'and')
- Yuki Musume: "Unintentionally, they": might sound better with a 'however': 'unintentionally, however, they'?
