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Just started reading it. One quick (tiny/niggling) thing caught my eye. Montebank is normally spelled mountebank. Sorry if that's petty. (I probably don't need to spell check but maybe it's helpful) 

Also: parentage instead of parontage (pg 13)

Bond 18 (pg 14)  uses 'he' for the entertainer which I believe you oft avoid in favor of they. Perhaps intentional.

Excited to keep reading

That's how it is spelled! I see a typo in one of the tables though, nice catch!

Sorry - yes, it was in the table and was correct elsewhere. I edit as a habit when I read... can't help it. Tossed the first few things I noticed here. 

Have had fun with Cairn in the past btw. Thanks for your efforts. Also enjoy the pod.