When I started this game, I was really interested to see where it was going to go, but as I played it, and finished it, I was left really wishing that there had been *something* more done.
First and foremost, what counts most is that you got something finished and submitted, which is infinitely better than not! That aside, I would have loved to see like, the pizza be able to get upgrades (maybe start as Cheese, and find Toppings that are hidden throughout the city that give the player bonuses). Also, the world was really lacking any sort of visual interest, so much that I very quickly realized that I wasn't even watching the "game", but solely the minimap, as I didn't feel like there was any reason to look elsewhere.
At any rate, nice idea, and I wish you luck in your future endeavors!