Im writing this before playing the game and I honestly love how your art looks! It looks very simple and nice! I'll edit it when I finish playing it.
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(before reading, I would like to warn you that I do spoil the story a lot so please finish playing the game before reading it so your experience doesn't get impacted!)
so here's what I think about this game... It's honestly very great! It's very cute and heartwarming and the build-up to the 18+ thing was definitely amazing (the 18+ scene felt incomplete... from my guess, it's giving me vibes that the game maker is more of a horror designer than a smut game one, which is NOT bad, but I just personally wish you'd fix it! Like, just add in the cum/climax dialogue so I can enjoy it more). Apart from the 18+ scene, the rest was a 10/10.
Horror element: 10/10 the dev definitely knows how to make the player jump, very cool and intense!
Romance: 8/10 it was amazing, but I have it an 8 because the smut part felt like it's a last minute thing (not very satisfying unfortunately) but the art was hot! Good job, dev!
Art: 1000/10 honestly, I really like how simple it is! I really feel nostalgic like I'm watching an old cartoon or something XD
Voice: 9/10 I honestly don't see any problem with it! He sounded very calming and even though it cuts out to the 'napping part, but I'll just let that go since the voice for me is an added extra.
Story: 10/10 Very good build-up like I said, I just love how he goes from a very caring guy to extremely obsessive! It reminds me of myself but like more sinister and scary XD speaking of scary, after the smut I definitely enjoyed the chase scene! (I don't need to describe the smut, it's just a basic-but-lovely scene) It really does give you that intense feeling!
Overall rating: 8/10 I honestly went into this game thinking we'd have sex but it was more story than smut- which I understand so I won't take it for granted on that behalf!
Things to improve:
- more voice (if it costs money, you don't have to! However, you could just do like a word or two like a couple VN games I play do. That's also fine!)
- more smut details! (C'mon dev, I wanna experience Keith more >o< I can't just just like read him getting close and then all of a sudden he just kisses me on the forehead and then fucking scares the living daylight out of me and almost kills me T-T Like, at least describe the cum in a general sense like "I can feel him finishing inside me" or something!)
But yeah that's pretty much it! I honestly had fun playing it and I know you can improve! I can sense how good your writing skills are xP anyway, thanks for reading and have a good day! <3