I really don't want to sound rude, but any chance of a proofreading/rescript on the text? I imagine English isn't your first language, which is perfectly fine - no judgement here. However, I've just made it passed the intro and photoshoot and.... I can't continue. It's literally giving me a headache. So just wanted to ask, so it will be easier for me to play in the future if the grammar and English get fixed. Your English in your replies to comments seems great, so what happened there, if you don't mind me asking? It seems like it will be a great game once I can understand it. The artwork looks fabulous. Thanks in advance.
P.S. I also commented a few weeks ago about being willing to help in this aspect. I just played it for the first time today, though.