I just want to say... wow, this is great, some of the code could be better optimized, and there's a few grammatical errors, but you make up for that in sheer quantity AND quality of your writing, it has been a long time since I fell for an interactive fiction game, and this one has truly captured me. The entire story is amazing, but I've always loved ones of a darker nature as I found it easier to feel them. Anyways, I just wanted to say that this is amazing and I adore your writing, thank you.