The story itself seems a bit messy to me, the best way for you and seeing the game would be to first write how you want the story to be and then go deeper, there are also 2 problems, well, more like 1 problem and a recommendation, the problem would be the menu that you have to be yes or yes in a conversation and the suggestion is that you try to implement a minigame that is not searching because in my case it ended up being tedious for me that is all I have to keep saying I hope my opinion helps you improve and good game.
Edit: It would also be good if it were translated into other languages since I speak Spanish if you want and in the end you do the translating thing I help you translate it and if the story ends up being long you could put events like fnaf 2 and things like that in the long term of course I don't think it will be done in the short term I hope you do very well see you later.