the presentation of this VN was genius! it felt like I was reading an animated comic with how all of the panels appeared. kudos to you guys for drawing all of those art assets, oh my god. the compositions were fantastic. the character art felt both loose and clean, and complemented the backgrounds extremely well. I had to take a moment to stare at how nicely the BG images were processed and textured. my one critique visually was that at some points it was hard to read through the text, as the black outline was a little thin against busier scenes... other than that, amazing job!!
the writing of this game was so, so good. i seriously loved your depiction of the trans protagonist. she was an entertaining read and I adored her connection (literally and emotionally) with the Machine. not once did the sex scenes feel exploitative or fetishistic despite its explicit nature, yay!!! i don't know if i can talk about spoilers here sorry but the depiction of sex and the weight it carried in this game was a breath of fresh air. what a wonderful game.