Holy shit. Okey, I usually never comment under anything, but I hope Ryuo reads this. I'm not a big fan of Adastra or Fbtw, because their World and their Character doesn't feel believable with how they just accept things.
But you managed to write this Story in a way that feels relatable and logical. I really really love the Story building, the World it happens in and the Characters all feel unique. I love how you hide little Mysteries and overall play with the Situation and overall feeling of it.
I'm mostly just rambling and not really able to find the right Words Probably, butyou really did an outstandingly Amazing job, and I wanted to tell you that!
Sure, there are some Situations that feel a bit sudden from the mood Change, but thats Natural and Human. Something that most of the other big VNs didn't manage to Capture.
I really hope you read this, and if you do. Thank you a lot for Writing this VN, I'm looking forward what else you'll do with it!