Hey! I played your game and it was an interesting entry! First, seeing Ren'Py speech bubbles being used (I suppose that's what you did) was honestly cool, and you used them so creatively!! I also enjoyed the intertwining with narration!
Story wise, GOODNESS IS MC'S BOYFRIEND CONTRADICTORY. (SPOILERS FOR THOSE READING THIS REVIEW)
I was at first surprised to see him be like "WHAT??" when MC agrees to break up, because, well, the boyfriend wanted the same thing?? But that's when you challenged my expecations: I thought the story was about the MC's boyfriend realising he's toxic to him and leaving him instead of hurting him. In the end, I realised he just wanted attention and was somehow gaslighting the MC so 'rfgvtfegv get lost, I hate him!!!
Very neat O2A2 entry, which I enjoyed! Congrats!