I like the ghost jokes! The end feels like “oops, I hit the 1000 word limit!”
Well, at least it doesn’t sound as bad living there as in the graveyard in Dungeons & Dragons: Honour Among Thieves after nobody asked the 3rd question!
Issues:
- no keyboard/gamepad-only support: Start/choice button doesn’t auto-focus and nav keys don’t focus either, so need mouse
- maybe no need to punch character and textbox on every new line? only when speaker changes. Unless it’s to indicate expression change and catch player’s eyes?