I loveeed this story, it was so beautifully done! I loved how the characters were not perfect but still very lovable, I laughed and cried while reading this. I know that you just finished and you should take some time to yourself but I will definitely play anything that you pull out cuz I just loved your writing style and how you portray your characters <3
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for me the only thing that left me with a sour taste was how the mc handled the situation with his ex, I know that he was trying to get through his thick skull once and for all that they were done but at the same time he was an addict and didn't have a support system so I think mc could have emphasize more how he still care for him as a friend, how his sister is still waiting for him, so maybe he could have fleed the town after talking with his sister and explained how he is going to get treatment and comeback or something like that, I just feel that he kind gave up on him and he was the only person besides his little sister that he could count on, I know it's not his problem and he shouldn't have to go thru all this for his ex but at the same time I think it would be more fitting to his personality and would be less sad cuz after the talk that they had I just kept thinking about how he is probably going to loose to the drugs and how his little sister may never see him again :c but at the same time, this is your story to tell so you should do you, I just needed to put my two cents on this cuz I loved how everything else came about, I hope this don't come off as meaning or arrogant but english is not my native language so just know that if sounded bad it wasn't my intention haha hope you are doing fine and happy with how everything came about, you did an amazing job <3