Best bits: It's great to see a fully-fledged story in an RPG Maker title. It's clear you put a lot of effort into the character art and setting up a narrative with a three act structure. It's fun to have a game with a bit of drama, so I enjoyed the villain's arc, even if I should have seen it coming with the title!
Ideas: Having a surreal and bizarre place the players enter from the normal world is a tricky thing to pull off. I liked how the characters deconstructed the logic of it. It would be fascinating to understand how it works a little more. What powers did she use to create this evil world to punish the others?
Thanks for submitting the game to the jam!