Oh my gosh! I couldn't expect that anyone will react on that small story at all (being pessimistic and stuff) but making a one-hour long walkthrough? That was very cool and I couldn't resist to watch it whole.
Mostly, I've seen the parts that were not clear or just annoying and tiresome (and some of this I thought I've fixed, but probably there was something with my last build uploading).
And I'm very sorry for this question mark on "Good ending". I know I would do the same as you and will look for GOOD ending, but the initial idea was that this story can't have a good ending because you can't scream "hey, I'm a zombie" and expect everyone will believe you. So yeah, technically Ending 5 is a good one because... you save the world from yourself! But there is no chance to save and yourself too and that is why it's not so good as you can expect.
But... I will update this story with other branches at some point, because I've wanted to explore different ways for this to develop, and who knows where it will lead. But video of Danny should be a key asset at this point :D
Thanks for this video and for your time! It was fun to watch and to see player's thinking in action (especially when it leads to making right choices), and also to notice examples of my probably far from perfect English!