Very nice work! I really enjoyed the writing in this build, I love seeing the great vulnerability of MC, but even more so that he wants to power through it despite the had first day. Also, the animations/effects in this build were nice! i.e. movements in the spar scene, or how characters would slightly change in size when they were or weren't speaking for example. Nice touches that could have been skimped on, but definitely do add to the visual experience. It's appreciated.
Excited for more to come :)