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City in the Clouds: I like the atmospheric quality of this track, though I do find myself desiring a stronger melody a bit sooner. You've definitely created an image of a delicate, beautiful city in the clouds with this instrumentation! There were a handful of harp notes that felt a bit out of place during the second half of the piece, though-- otherwise, not bad.

Timeless: definitely love the use of reversed audio, and the sprinkling in of gestures used in the last track.

Jungle Time: love this stately flute melody! This track has much more of a sense of directionality to it. For next time, perhaps add a countermelody during the repeat? The interplay of the clarinet and flute was great, and you can totally lean into that more.

Ocean Time: not too much to say, this is another solid track.

On the whole, you did well! I enjoyed how you were able to show the same location in multiple states, but also show us other fun, different locations! Good job, and keep writing!

Thank you for the encouragement, and especially for taking the time to comment on each track; I'll definitely keep a lot of this in mind.